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PostSubject: The Final Story   Fri Nov 02, 2012 6:14 pm

Before Reading: Just so some people know, this is a very very dark story which will have a major amount of killing and swearing.

Background: The story takes place 200 years after the events of Generations. And everything known about the world of Sonic has completely changed. Everyone is dead, and we see a powerless Shadow, unable to use his chaos powers. But immortality sill remains. The planet has been taken over by G.U.N that has become a tyrannical government that now rules. Shadow, was unable to stop the events of this happening and has now left the new G.U.N, and has become a lone wolf. Now with the entire government after him, he questions if the world will ever be the same again. That is until a group that fights for freedom, finds him.

Book 1: Beyond Our Days, Part 1

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PostSubject: Re: The Final Story   Fri Nov 02, 2012 6:26 pm

Wow, this is amazing!

I'm definately looking forward to more chapters :D

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PostSubject: Re: The Final Story   Sat Nov 03, 2012 2:40 am

Added Chapter 2: Burn Them Out.

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PostSubject: Re: The Final Story   Tue Nov 06, 2012 2:22 pm

Very interesting story, can't wait for the next chapter! :D

But there still are some things I didn't quite understand...

1. Why does Shadow, after asking the bartender about Scourge, knock over those bottles, and how does he manage to get away with it so easily?

2. Don't you think that shooting those two foxes in the head is.....I don't know.....a bit too much? I mean, I'm sure he could have made them give up and run away if he had just beaten them a little...Killing is going a little too far, in my opinion...
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PostSubject: Re: The Final Story   Tue Nov 06, 2012 6:01 pm

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1. Why does Shadow, after asking the bartender about Scourge, knock over those bottles, and how does he manage to get away with it so easily?

Knocking over the bottle is what allowed him to light the fire behind the bar, when he shot the gun it ignited the alcohol and heated up the other bottles causing them to explode.

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2. Don't you think that shooting those two foxes in the head is.....I don't know.....a bit too much? I mean, I'm sure he could have made them give up and run away if he had just beaten them a little...Killing is going a little too far, in my opinion...

It's a corrupt future, everything you know is totally broken. Laws no longer are in effect other than G.U.N enforcing their own laws. And the part where Shadow shoots the foxes is just me showing off his accuracy and quickness with a gun. Keep this in mind, he hasn't had his powers in over 200 years, and using a gun has become his main asset, aside from knives and other make-shift weapons.

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PostSubject: Re: The Final Story   Wed Nov 07, 2012 2:29 pm

So, should we be expecting the next chapter any time soon?.....
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PostSubject: Re: The Final Story   Wed Nov 07, 2012 5:00 pm

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So, should we be expecting the next chapter any time soon?.....

Soon, I'm still finishing it up, and the amount of work I've had to do lately hasn't really helped.

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PostSubject: Re: The Final Story   Wed Nov 07, 2012 6:35 pm

Added Chapter 3: Passing Days

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PostSubject: Re: The Final Story   Thu Nov 08, 2012 2:31 pm

QUOTE: "But, won't we forget everything that's happened? The time we've spent together over the past two hundred years?" He asked her.

LOL? :D
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PostSubject: Re: The Final Story   Thu Nov 08, 2012 5:10 pm

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QUOTE: "But, won't we forget everything that's happened? The time we've spent together over the past two hundred years?" He asked her.

LOL? :D

It's talking about how everyone, for the past 200 years. Amy, Rouge, Knuckles, Sonic, Tails, and so on. Have spent the past 200 years together. Basically they're able to choose where they live when they die. But it's very limited. Pretty much like an island floating out in the ocean.

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PostSubject: Re: The Final Story   Thu Nov 08, 2012 5:23 pm

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teomares wrote:
QUOTE: "But, won't we forget everything that's happened? The time we've spent together over the past two hundred years?" He asked her.

LOL? :D

It's talking about how everyone, for the past 200 years. Amy, Rouge, Knuckles, Sonic, Tails, and so on. Have spent the past 200 years together. Basically they're able to choose where they live when they die. But it's very limited. Pretty much like an island floating out in the ocean.
Ookay....if you say so... :D
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PostSubject: Re: The Final Story   Thu Nov 08, 2012 7:22 pm

What inspires you Shadow?You became one of the fan-fic writers all of a sudden?

AND in my op its a lot better if they dont remember anything ya know?In the end all of them would just feel like something happened but none of them know what it was.Except shadow...now that would be interesting.
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PostSubject: Re: The Final Story   Thu Nov 08, 2012 8:55 pm

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What inspires you Shadow?You became one of the fan-fic writers all of a sudden?

AND in my op its a lot better if they dont remember anything ya know?In the end all of them would just feel like something happened but none of them know what it was.Except shadow...now that would be interesting.

1. I'm still a human being. Just because I role play Shadow doesn't mean I can't act like a human.

2. I'm actually going to have it written like that, when Shadow actually does go back in time. Everyone around him will not have any memories of what will happen. (As in they will be the same before they all died) Only until Shadow stops ALL their deaths, they will be completely unaware of anything.

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PostSubject: Re: The Final Story   Thu Nov 08, 2012 10:35 pm

I love this story so much. It finally shows a dark side to Shadow, he's no longer that 'You've got dis Sawnic.' Friendly guy. He finally gets a darker personality!
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PostSubject: Re: The Final Story   Fri Nov 09, 2012 12:26 pm

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I love this story so much. It finally shows a dark side to Shadow, he's no longer that 'You've got dis Sawnic.' Friendly guy. He finally gets a darker personality!
Great...another role-player...you should like shadows innocent side,not the dark side IF you are playing Maria.

(I hope that didnt sound too rude)
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PostSubject: Re: The Final Story   Fri Nov 09, 2012 2:39 pm

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Great...another role-player...you should like shadows innocent side,not the dark side IF you are playing Maria.

LOLwut?
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PostSubject: Re: The Final Story   Fri Nov 09, 2012 5:12 pm

preez45 wrote:
MariaTheHedgie wrote:
I love this story so much. It finally shows a dark side to Shadow, he's no longer that 'You've got dis Sawnic.' Friendly guy. He finally gets a darker personality!
Great...another role-player...you should like shadows innocent side,not the dark side IF you are playing Maria.

(I hope that didnt sound too rude)

Actually preez, that's my real life girl friend, who is also named Maria, and is a blue eye'd blonde...

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PostSubject: Re: The Final Story   Fri Nov 09, 2012 7:01 pm

People Nowadays....

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PostSubject: Re: The Final Story   Sat Nov 10, 2012 1:42 am

Shadow The Hedgehog wrote:
preez45 wrote:
MariaTheHedgie wrote:
I love this story so much. It finally shows a dark side to Shadow, he's no longer that 'You've got dis Sawnic.' Friendly guy. He finally gets a darker personality!
Great...another role-player...you should like shadows innocent side,not the dark side IF you are playing Maria.

(I hope that didnt sound too rude)

Actually preez, that's my real life girl friend, who is also named Maria, and is a blue eye'd blonde...

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Yeah! That's no way to treat a lady! You should be ashamed of yourself....
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PostSubject: Re: The Final Story   Sat Nov 10, 2012 5:41 am

teomares wrote:
Shadow The Hedgehog wrote:
preez45 wrote:
MariaTheHedgie wrote:
I love this story so much. It finally shows a dark side to Shadow, he's no longer that 'You've got dis Sawnic.' Friendly guy. He finally gets a darker personality!
Great...another role-player...you should like shadows innocent side,not the dark side IF you are playing Maria.

(I hope that didnt sound too rude)

Actually preez, that's my real life girl friend, who is also named Maria, and is a blue eye'd blonde...

xD

Yeah! That's no way to treat a lady! You should be ashamed of yourself....

LoL I agree.
That was too badass speaking to woman like that.
You just called her a faker like almost vanishing her actual existence.

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PostSubject: Re: The Final Story   Sat Nov 10, 2012 12:36 pm

sewer56lol wrote:
teomares wrote:
Shadow The Hedgehog wrote:
preez45 wrote:
MariaTheHedgie wrote:
I love this story so much. It finally shows a dark side to Shadow, he's no longer that 'You've got dis Sawnic.' Friendly guy. He finally gets a darker personality!
Great...another role-player...you should like shadows innocent side,not the dark side IF you are playing Maria.

(I hope that didnt sound too rude)

Actually preez, that's my real life girl friend, who is also named Maria, and is a blue eye'd blonde...

xD

Yeah! That's no way to treat a lady! You should be ashamed of yourself....

LoL I agree.
That was too badass speaking to woman like that.
You just called her a faker like almost vanishing her actual existence.
Ok i didnt know that i'm sorry and stop trying bash me all of you lol...
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PostSubject: Re: The Final Story   Sat Nov 10, 2012 3:23 pm

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Ok i didnt know that i'm sorry and stop trying bash me all of you lol...

No one's bashing you.....we're just bringing to your attention the fact that you have to be respectful towards other people, especially if you don't know them, even if you're on the internet and you don't see them face to face. Smile

Hope I didn't upset you...
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PostSubject: Re: The Final Story   Tue Nov 20, 2012 6:30 pm

I'll try to get the next chapter out as soon as I can. I've been kinda slacking with this lately...

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PostSubject: Re: The Final Story   Wed Nov 21, 2012 4:12 pm

Can't wait for the next chapter. But please, take your time and do it properly...Don't rush.
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PostSubject: Re: The Final Story   Sat Nov 24, 2012 2:14 am

Chapter 4: Welcome to the Jungle, added.

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