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PostSubject: Re: The Final Story   Sat Nov 24, 2012 9:43 am

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Chapter 4: Welcome to the Jungle, added.

Welcome to the rice fields, motherfucker!!! :D

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PostSubject: Re: The Final Story   Sat Nov 24, 2012 6:02 pm

I'm starting to realize how much this song sounds just like my story.

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A long time ago there lived a man -Shadow during the time of everyone's death
He was searching for an answer -Him figuring out how to stop GUN
He had seen it all, faces in the mirror -Fast forward 200 years
Alone in that room made him shiver -Him in the apartment

Burning candles, seeing shadows in the night -Him in the room, and the present world.
Bringing back memories in mystical light -Him remembering his friends
Holy spirit in an unholy night -The part with Tikal and Sonic
Enlightenments never felt so right -Them figuring out how to save everyone.

We don't know
If we Lived our Lives Before
Is it a dream or just a fantasy
We don't know
If we Lived our Lives Before
Is it a dream or just a fantasy
Fantasy

[Solo - Axel]

On his journey learning all about life -What Shadow learns over the past 200 years
He was dreaming of the past -Him wishing he could return to his old life
Praying day and night, looking for a solution -Trying to figure out how to do that
But in the end there's only confusion -Lyric Line says all.

Burning candles, seeing shadows in the night
Bringing back memories in mystical light
Holy spirit in an unholy night
Enlightenments never felt so right

We don't know
If we Lived our Lives Before
Is it a dream or just a fantasy
We don't know
If we Lived our Lives Before
Is it a dream or just a fantasy
Fantasy

[Solo - Axel]

We don't know
If we Lived our Lives Before
Is it a dream or just a fantasy
We don't know
If we Lived our Lives Before
Is it a dream or just a fantasy

We don't know, oh
Is it a fantasy or just a dream, yeah
We Lived Our Lives Before

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PostSubject: Re: The Final Story   Sun Nov 25, 2012 4:35 am

Chapter 5: A Universal Meet Up, Added. Now things will begin to get a lot more interesting.

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PostSubject: Re: The Final Story   Sun Nov 25, 2012 2:11 pm

Will you accept a "thumbs up" from me for your great work? :D
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PostSubject: Re: The Final Story   Sun Nov 25, 2012 4:28 pm

Added Chapter 6, didn't see that coming now did ya?

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PostSubject: Re: The Final Story   Sun Nov 25, 2012 5:40 pm

Lol at the Silver being the doctor. xD
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PostSubject: Re: The Final Story   Mon Nov 26, 2012 4:23 pm

Oh....so now we have this Sally girl in the series...

Should we be expecting some romance?....:3
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PostSubject: Re: The Final Story   Mon Nov 26, 2012 4:58 pm

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Oh....so now we have this Sally girl in the series...

Should we be expecting some romance?....:3

Meh, I thought it would be a good idea to bring in Archie's characters (Even though I hate a good portion of them) in this futuristic world.

But as for romance. I can tell you not to expect anything serious between Shadow and Sally, I mean, I may have that kiss or two in there somewhere at some point. But as for an actual relationship no.

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PostSubject: Re: The Final Story   Thu Nov 29, 2012 3:05 pm

WAIT! Silver? Doctor?

LOL I see what you did there....

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PostSubject: Re: The Final Story   Thu Nov 29, 2012 3:26 pm

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WAIT! Silver? Doctor?

LOL I see what you did there....

I don't.....What is it?
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PostSubject: Re: The Final Story   Thu Nov 29, 2012 3:48 pm

Only people who have seen Doctor Who will get it.

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PostSubject: Re: The Final Story   Thu Nov 29, 2012 5:01 pm

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Only people who have seen Doctor Who will get it.

That, and I kinda thought it would make sense. Razz

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PostSubject: Re: The Final Story   Sat Dec 01, 2012 11:06 pm

Added Chapter 7: The Beginning of the End.

Let's take a look to the past, shall we?

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PostSubject: Re: The Final Story   Sun Dec 09, 2012 11:19 am

I've just read the first chapter, and I have to say this is a great story! Can't wait to read the rest!
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PostSubject: Re: The Final Story   Sat Dec 15, 2012 6:02 pm

I'm rewritting chapter 6. Stay tuned.

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PostSubject: Re: The Final Story   Thu Dec 20, 2012 4:47 pm

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I'm rewritting chapter 6. Stay tuned.

Keep up the good work, Shaodw! :D
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PostSubject: Re: The Final Story   Thu Dec 20, 2012 6:03 pm

It's coming along well :D

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PostSubject: Re: The Final Story   Tue Dec 25, 2012 1:50 am

Alright, finished re-writing chapter 6, now to rewrite chapter 7. Shouldn't be to hard considering all I've got to do is change the beginning by a bit.

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PostSubject: Re: The Final Story   Fri Dec 28, 2012 3:48 pm

I finally read it...It's just amazing
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PostSubject: Re: The Final Story   Mon Dec 31, 2012 9:00 pm

What happened to the chapter with Silver?

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PostSubject: Re: The Final Story   Sat Jan 12, 2013 1:31 am

Reuploaded Chapter 7

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PostSubject: Re: The Final Story   Mon Jan 21, 2013 10:42 pm

Uploaded Chapter 8: Loose Ends

And added theme song of the story, Lived our Lives Before.

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PostSubject: The Final Story Reply Archives.   Fri Mar 08, 2013 1:04 am

Bout damn time I finished Chapter 9.

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PostSubject: Re: The Final Story   Fri Mar 29, 2013 1:07 am

Book 1: Beyond Our Days, Part 2

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PostSubject: The Final Story   Fri Mar 29, 2013 1:11 am

Before Reading: Just so some people know, this is a very very dark story which will have a major amount of killing and swearing.

Background: The story takes place 200 years after the events of Generations. And everything known about the world of Sonic has completely changed. Everyone is dead, and we see a powerless Shadow, unable to use his chaos powers. But immortality sill remains. The planet has been taken over by G.U.N that has become a tyrannical government that now rules. Shadow, was unable to stop the events of this happening and has now left the new G.U.N, and has become a lone wolf. Now with the entire government after him, he questions if the world will ever be the same again. That is until a group that fights for freedom, finds him.

Book 1: Beyond Our Days, Part 1

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